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Sky Full of Elephants

★☆☆☆☆ - A brilliant premise lost in poor execution

“What would a world without white people look like?”

That bold, daring question drives the premise of Sky Full of Elephants, a thought-provoking and imaginative setup that initially promises a landmark exploration of race, power, and possibility. The story kicks off with intrigue as Charles, an ex-con turned professor at Howard University, embarks on a cross-country journey. But the promise is short-lived, as the plot quickly unravels into a muddled narrative with weak world-building and a frustrating lack of coherence.

I was genuinely excited about this book. The premise had the potential to stand alongside speculative classics that tackle race with creativity and nuance. And to its credit, there are moments where the author poses powerful, even poetic, questions. One line in particular stood out:

“We finally got the world to ourselves, and we still just continuing on with the program they made for us… The patriarchy didn’t walk into that water, but I sometimes wish it did too.”

Yet, despite the potential, the execution falters - badly. For a story centered on imagining a world without whiteness, white people remain oddly central, dominating the book’s emotional energy and narrative focus. Rather than exploring new possibilities, the book becomes a long, often angry soliloquy about what white people did or didn’t do, leaving little room for actual world-building or character depth.

The tone often feels preachy, and in addressing racism, the book sometimes veers into being reductive, stereotypical, or even racist and nationalistic. The portrayal of Black people as chaotic or helpless in the absence of white structures is baffling and undermines the point the author seems to want to make. Other cultures - especially non-American Black identities - are presented in ways that feel patronizing or caricatured. Meanwhile, the fate of non-Black, non-white people in this imagined world is barely acknowledged.

The characters are flat and largely unchanged by their experiences. Sidney, one of the protagonists, is especially grating - petulant, underdeveloped, and emotionally shallow. Much of the dialogue feels like the author is speaking through the characters rather than letting them live, resulting in a book that tells a lot, but shows very little. The lack of a compelling plot arc or real conflict makes the story feel more like a lecture than a novel.

I wanted to love this. I started at 5 stars. But the more I read, the more it slipped. By the end, it felt like a draft that had bypassed real editing, thought, or refinement.

In the end, Sky Full of Elephants is a great idea undone by its own ambition. The author blames the characters for failing to imagine a new world - but that responsibility lies with the storyteller. This book didn’t give us that vision. It gave us a rant.

I sincerely hope this gets reworked - perhaps as a screenplay with a stronger narrative, deeper characters, and the nuance this powerful idea deserves.

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