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Sky Full of Elephants
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I was not expecting a book about the sudden extinction of American white folks to feel very YA but here we are. This book was written for a high school audience. It’s also very preachy and - dare I say - self righteous. The characters share “historical facts” that, while quite interesting, have unnatural placement within the text and are unrelated to the progress of the plot. I came here for suspense, thrill, and a new perspective on the structures of race in America and I gained absolutely none of that. Overall, the grit is lacking, and after the first few chapters, the story is too. I am so very disappointed that this book did not live up to its premise. It desperately needed more thoughtful world-building.
Sidney gives exactly what I expect from a sheltered biracial girl with a white mom - insufferable. It’s unfortunate that she’s a central character.
Now that I think about it, I’m not so sure that Black people are the target demographic for this book. There’s too much over explanation, which raises my suspicion about the author’s motives. It seems that Campbell wrote this knowing it would get a rise out of white people ( or at least pique their interest) and he expected them to read it. He wrote with them in mind. If I could humbly share of word of advice: decenter the white gaze. It dilutes the story.
Two stars instead of one for the interesting premise.
Sidney gives exactly what I expect from a sheltered biracial girl with a white mom - insufferable. It’s unfortunate that she’s a central character.
Now that I think about it, I’m not so sure that Black people are the target demographic for this book. There’s too much over explanation, which raises my suspicion about the author’s motives. It seems that Campbell wrote this knowing it would get a rise out of white people ( or at least pique their interest) and he expected them to read it. He wrote with them in mind. If I could humbly share of word of advice: decenter the white gaze. It dilutes the story.
Two stars instead of one for the interesting premise.
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Oct 06, 2024 06:28PM
I too thought it had a YA feel, especially once Mobile becomes the setting.
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YES! everything you said in this review was right on the money. You can tell when folks are writing a book that's not for the community, it's subtle but it's there and ya clocked it- I did too. I hope the author tries again tho because the premise was premising!
I’m a white lady, and I read this book and mostly liked it. I am NOT here to push back on what you’re saying though! I’m genuinely curious, based on your review and the comment of chantel nouseforaname above this comment: do you have any book recommendations that you’ve really loved that don’t center the white perspective/gaze? Obviously no pressure to reply to this because (as is being fairly pointed out), none of this should be about me. But if anyone does have any recommendations, I’d be super appreciative and excited to check them out!



